Agree with offsides comment above. Should include ones like "....should have looked down the line." or "There's keen and there's stupid. He could be both."

I'd also like to see some 'crowd reaction' comments. ".....whistles from the home crowd...." "....now the crowd have found their voice...." "This place is jumping!" "...silent as a morgue" all based on who/which team scores (and how many), who fouls etc