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    Wiki Contributor Incredipede's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cat Harrison View Post

    1. A larger stadium increases the amount of spectators that can attend your matches. This is already explained by the sentence "Upgrading it increases spectator capacity and gives access to better facilities."

    2. Parking upgrades allow more spectators to attend your matches. Changed, I added "The higher the level of the Parking Lot, the more people can spectate your game and support you."

    3. The Scoreboard offers are a real-time overview of the match score and events, and is necessary for upgrading to larger stadiums. Changed.

    4. In Club third paragraph:"If you wish to equip an emblem or jersey..." Really awkward, why not use "use". I can't find this one.
    Thanks for your feedback. However I don't see an error in referrals, I think it's good like that. :-)
    Last edited by Incredipede; 08-25-2013 at 10:03 PM.
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