Introducing the Top Eleven Wiki

[Cat Harrison]

" Stadiums

A stadium increases the amount of spectator that can attend your matches."

Maybe:
A larger stadium increases the amount of spectators that can attend your matches.

and

" Parking
Parking lots affect the number of people that attend your matches. "

Leaves one wondering, how?

Maybe:
Parking upgrades allow more spectators to attend your matches.


one more

" Scoreboard
The Scoreboard offers are a real-time overview of the match result and events, and is necessary to upgrade for larger stadiums. "

maybe : The Scoreboard offers a real-time overview of the match score and events, and is necessary for upgrading to larger stadiums.


One last tiny one
In Club third paragraph:"If you wish to equip an emblem or jersey..." Really awkward, why not use "use"


p.s. Now I've got that song stuck in my head!

[Incredipede]

1. A larger stadium increases the amount of spectators that can attend your matches. This is already explained by the sentence "Upgrading it increases spectator capacity and gives access to better facilities."

2. Parking upgrades allow more spectators to attend your matches. Changed, I added "The higher the level of the Parking Lot, the more people can spectate your game and support you."

3. The Scoreboard offers are a real-time overview of the match score and events, and is necessary for upgrading to larger stadiums. Changed.

4. In Club third paragraph:"If you wish to equip an emblem or jersey..." Really awkward, why not use "use". I can't find this one.

Thanks for your feedback. However I don't see an error in referrals, I think it's good like that. :-)