Introducing the Top Eleven Wiki

[Cat Harrison]

" Stadiums

A stadium increases the amount of spectator that can attend your matches."

Maybe:
A larger stadium increases the amount of spectators that can attend your matches.

and

" Parking
Parking lots affect the number of people that attend your matches. "

Leaves one wondering, how?

Maybe:
Parking upgrades allow more spectators to attend your matches.


one more

" Scoreboard
The Scoreboard offers are a real-time overview of the match result and events, and is necessary to upgrade for larger stadiums. "

maybe : The Scoreboard offers a real-time overview of the match score and events, and is necessary for upgrading to larger stadiums.


One last tiny one
In Club third paragraph:"If you wish to equip an emblem or jersey..." Really awkward, why not use "use"


p.s. Now I've got that song stuck in my head!