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    From 1 match - if anyone wants to suggest a change to any of these then feel free

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    a) = current commentary
    b) = suggested change

    a) player is preparing to shoot! He takes the shot from over 30m out!
    b) player steadies himself and shoots from 30m out.


    a) player kicks the ball upfield from his goal! Can a counter attack develop?
    b) player clears it from the box, looking to set up a counter attack.


    a) player is dribbling in a small space.
    b) player shows good close control in a crowd.


    a) player makes a mistake in the centre of the field! He gives the ball awayto the opposing team!
    b) player's mistake in the midfield gifts possession to the opposition.


    a) player is in the run-up
    b) player collects the ball and runs at goal.


    a) player finds his teammate.
    b) player with a neat pass OR player makes the pass.


    a) But player is in the right place and stops the attack breaking through!
    b) But player is well placed to disrupt the attack.


    a) player clears the ball as far away as possible from their own goal!
    b) player takes no chances and clears it long.


    a) player has enough time to position himself. Shoots...
    And? There is no goal! The ball went past the right post.
    b) player has space and time to compose himself then shoots....
    ….but sends it narrowly wide on the right.


    a) The referee will not tolerate such actions. player was lucky, there is no card.
    b) The referee lectures player but he escapes without a card.


    a) player positioned the ball. It would suit him better from the other side.But he can still threaten the goal keeper from here. He shoots.....
    b) Although not onhis favoured side, its in a threatenening position. player places the ball.
    He shoots.....


    a) The players go for their well-deserved break.
    b) The whistle goes for half-time. OR
    The players leave the pitch to catch a flight to the Maldives.


    a) team gain first possession of the ball in the second half.
    b)It's team to restart the match.


    a) And what is the referee showing? Nothing, everything is clean, player stops the opponent.
    b) player blocks his opponent? The opposition appeals and....
    ….the referee waves them away and signals 'play on'.


    a) The referee has awarded a corner kick to team. The players of the opposing team disagree with the referees' decision.
    b) It's a corner for team.
    The opposition surrounds the referee but the decision stands - a corner.


    a) player puts a powerful pass into the centre.
    a) player drives it into the box.


    a) Penalty! There seems to be some hesitation from the referee.
    b) The referee pauses before pointing to the spot. Penalty!


    a) player handled the opponent in the air. The referee awards a foul.
    a) The referee blows for a foul!
    There was a push in the air by player.


    a) player opted for the most secure solution. Kicked the ball beyond his penalty area.
    b) player plays it safe and clears the ball out of the box.


    a) player leaves the field to a standing ovation. player gets comes into the game.
    b) As player1 goes off to applause player 2 takes to thefield.


    a) player kicks the ball far away from his goal. Can his teammates get to theball first?
    b) player sends the ball upfield and team fight to retain possession.


    a) player was stronger in the clash and takes the ball away.
    b) player uses his strength to claim the ball.


    a) player is looking where his team mates are. Attempts to play a short pass.
    b) player looks for a man and plays it short.


    a) The defence is spread. team can start a counter attack.
    b) The defence is wide open to a counter-attack.


    a) player approaches the referee to talk to him. Yellow card!
    b) As player remonstrates to the referee he flashes yellow!


    a) Free kick awarded to team in the dabger zone. A crowd of team players have formed around the ball, they are quarrelling but everything is back to normal.
    b) Free kick awarded to team in a dangerous area.
    team are arguing over who will take it, then the ball is placed....


    a) player only grazed the ball with his fingers. The ball is going into the corner.
    b) player gets a finger-tip to the ball.
    But its enough to send it out for a corner.


    a) He is trying the bicycle-kick! Can player get past a defender?
    b) player is tightly marked but tries a spectacular bicycle kick.


    a) player stops the attack. Great save!
    b) player makes the challenge and the attack breaks down. Great tackle OR block.


    a) player includes a teammate.
    b) player finds his man.


    a) player read where the attacker would head to.
    Intervened without a problem.
    b) player reads the play, marking the attacker closely, and makes the interception.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phil Scrivener View Post
    still nothing to do with a player being offside!!!!!!! ?????? yet we have the option to play offside trap ???? also it's very common in real football to be caught offside !!!!
    And from a devensive, getting the ball and not clear the area but, to get in counter-attack -> then attack.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Buffs Mad View Post
    From 1 match - if anyone wants to suggest a change to any of these then feel free

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    b) = suggested change
    "a) player finds his teammate." and some others sound perfectly fine as they are now! Don't try to hard to fix everyhting
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    Quote Originally Posted by Gintaras Račas View Post
    "a) player finds his teammate." and some others sound perfectly fine as they are now! Don't try to hard to fix everyhting
    Mark up the others too then folks reading them know.

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    French / Français :

    joueur X fait un tacke et envoie la balle plus loin c'est bien joué

    joueur X fait un tacle et envoie la balle plus loin c'est bien joué

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    Last edited by Kaizer Franz; 08-07-2014 at 09:10 PM.

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    Current: Player xy runs along the sideline! Dribbles past the defender! Crosses the ball into thr box
    Fixed: Player xy runs along the sideline! Dribbles past the defender! Crosses the ball into the box
    Word "the" is misspelled!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pétur Benediktsson View Post
    You should start by inprove the game and stop leting teams win with much lower qouality and no one present in games and 20% possession.
    Stay on subject, thank you!
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    Current : joueur X choisit la solution la plus sûre il envoie la balle loin de la zone de penalty
    Fixed : joueur X choisi la solution la plus sûre il envoie la balle loin de sa surface

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    Current : joueur X semble vouloir procurer des instants magiques
    Fixed : joueur X semble vouloir se procurer des instants magiques

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    Current : joueur X place la balle et prend le coup franc
    Fixed : joueur X place la balle c'est lui qui va tenter sa chance

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    Current : joueur X envoie la balle dans une zone encombrée
    Fixed : joueur X envoie la balle dans le paquet

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    Current : joueur X s'apprête a tirer il recule de 25m et prend son élan
    Fixed : joueur X s'apprête a tirer il tente sa chance des 25m

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    Current : joueur X fait un passe dans le vide il l'envoie entre les jambes du défenseur
    Fixed : joueur X fait une passe en profondeur elle passe entre les jambes du défenseur

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    Current : coup franc accordé à ( équipe X ) dans la zone de danger. Une foule de joueurs s'ets formée autour de la balle Mais tout est rentré dans l'ordre
    Fixed : coup franc accordé à ( équipe X ) près de la surface . Une foule de joueurs se forme autour du ballon Mais tout est rentré dans l'ordre

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    Current : Et...? Rien ! Dommage ! Coup de pied de but !
    Fixed : Et ...? Rien ! Dommage ! 6 mètres !

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    Last edited by Kaizer Franz; 08-07-2014 at 09:57 PM.
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    Dear support team Top Eleven.!

    I was playing Top Eleven people in Vietnam. Recently I saw the game Elven Top 8 days ago great technical error (server frequently disconnected), and today (08/05/2014), the error happened on comments.
    I see new comments by Vietnamese in Top Eleven is too lengthy, cumbersome, like poetry and literature, not football, not scientific and professional. (It must be translated into Vietnamese by people without specialized knowledge about football).

    I suggest that the short commentary (because no one could read the words displayed are much too long), with specialization in football.

    So you adjust it so that we are excited to stick with this game.

    Thanks ...!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kien Nguyen View Post
    Dear support team Top Eleven.!

    I was playing Top Eleven people in Vietnam. Recently I saw the game Elven Top 8 days ago great technical error (server frequently disconnected), and today (08/05/2014), the error happened on comments.
    I see new comments by Vietnamese in Top Eleven is too lengthy, cumbersome, like poetry and literature, not football, not scientific and professional. (It must be translated into Vietnamese by people without specialized knowledge about football).

    I suggest that the short commentary (because no one could read the words displayed are much too long), with specialization in football.

    So you adjust it so that we are excited to stick with this game.

    Thanks ...!
    Google Translate is what they use for Vietnamese, as well as Thai, my native language

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